diff --git a/docs/alpine-desktop-setup/installation.md b/docs/alpine-desktop-setup/installation.md
index 49de686..5e3e9fb 100644
--- a/docs/alpine-desktop-setup/installation.md
+++ b/docs/alpine-desktop-setup/installation.md
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ And also remove some junk left over by grub.
 # cd /boot && unlink boot
 ```
 
-You can also install `os-prober` which can find operating systems and add them to your bootloader. Besides that `gummiboot` can also be configured with the file `/boot/efi/loader/loader.conf` in which you can specify the timeout and what OS it should load into by default.
+You can also install `os-prober` which can find operating systems and add them to your bootloader. Besides that `gummiboot` can also be configured with the file `/boot/efi/loader/loader.conf` with which you can specify the timeout and the default OS.
 
 ```
 default alpine
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ timeout 2
 editor no
 ```
 
-Before finishing up the installation `networkmanager` will be installed for networking.
+Before finishing the installation, `networkmanager` will be installed for networking.
 
 ```
 # apk add networkmanager
@@ -168,5 +168,6 @@ Now exit out of the chroot and you should be able to reboot into a working Alpin
 # reboot
 ```
 
-> Do note that "Linux Boot Manager" will have to be set to load first in your bios.
-> When booting up your screen might appear blank but you will have to enter the password you added for encryption and press enter.
+When booting up your screen might appear blank, this is the encryption prompt. Enter the encryption key and press enter to boot.
+
+> Do note that "Linux Boot Manager" will have to be set to load first in your bios.
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